In Liam's  response Liam did a good job summarizing the book From Baghdad With Love.  It was to the point and let anyone who hasn't read the book know what it's about with out to much detail or giving away anything vital. In the second paragraph Liam states his opinion very well.  Throughout the response Liam did a very good job of getting to the point.  The presentation of his response is also very nice neat and shows obvious signs of care.