my draft

Larry the dolphin is a dolphin living off the coast of Hawaii

           

            Larry is a bully who hurts the other fishes feelings

            He would say many mean thing like stupid stingray you don’t have a head or stupid clown fish orange is a weird color

             Larry would say mean things to the fish day and night during and after school

            Until one day a new student came to Larry’s school. His name was chompers and he was a even bigger bully than Larry. He was a baby great white shark and he was bigger than Larry.

           

Now it was Larry’s turn to be called mean names and he didn’t like it at all he hated how it made him feel

            Larry didn't know what to do he was so used to being the biggest he never thought it would change.

            One day ugly the tuna and Tim the stingray found Larry crying “what’s wrong lary “ they asked “yea how do you like it…. Err I mean that’s terrible maybe we could help you feel better we developed a couple tricks while you were bullying us to make the hurt go away. “yeah don’t see why not now that you’re a loser like us… I I um mean a cool nice person “.

            From that day on Larry began to hang out with Tim and ugly until one day Larry decided to talk to chompers “hey chompers” “What do you want nerd cant you see I’m busy with these nerds” chomper said “you should stop being such a meany I mean I know you only do it because your in secure about not being the smartest person but hey neither am I and with some help you could become very smart you just have to ask”\

“you really mean it I do need a tutor your right I have been a meany thank you so much maybe one day I can learn not to bully but I have some time to go” chompers said as he shoved Larry to the ground then he helped him up and swam away.